Sunday, September 28, 2014

Story Prompts Of Characters



What would you look at being the character?  What feelings and experiences would it inspire?


1) Your character’s a criminal defense attorney who travels between courthouses to defend clients of every kind.  Many clients seem surprisingly unconcerned about their situations.  Your character decides he will have to take matters in his own hands and find out about their situations for himself. For him using every tactic, law is about justice and saving his own life.


2) Your character is a criminologist, in the field of forensics.  A police detective is assisting and at times challenging him.  He has to choose sides with clues reaching back into the cities dark past, of a killer madwoman who won’t stop.


3) Your character a weather investigator is summoned to another country to analyze mysterious noises—recently sound only has battered the outside of homes.  He discovers evidence that may be extraterrestrial.  Historically a powerful documented civilization that has surfaced to carry out its final phase against its most hated enemies, the new world order.


4) Your characters mother who is about to get married is in a mysterious car crash. Everything on hold the small family to be vacations across country.  They encounter volcanic refugees on their strange journey.  Adventurous encounters are gripping as they make their way back home.


5) Your character is sailing toward a foreign land to claim his century’s old birthright when the vessel is captured.  Treachery from a mainland powerful dark organization may be the cause of the savage ship capture. Your character is offered a choice.

Sunday, July 6, 2014

Tension By Revealing Writing Technique



As the story unfolds the increasing size of something or less extensive than it first appears is one tension technique.  The following example is an excerpt from my latest Thriller book.

On one of the turns she happened to glance up above the
tree line. In the sky there was a white disc object; red fiery
hollow rings started to come from it. Actually it seemed they
were coming closer, and were growing larger the closer they
got to her.
She turned a corner and the disc was covered by a mountain
ridge. That’s better she thought, I’ll bet Jay has never seen anything
like that. Wait until I tell him about it, I know he’s into
physics. What fun he’ll be so excited to know what is flying
just north of his city. She took another drink of white chocolate
mocha coffee.
Anna drove many miles as the curved highway 101 followed
the coastline. She rounded a curve to find herself in the strange
swirls of a misty fog bank. She saw light blue areas in the white
fog. Farther into the fog she slowed her car down.
Small water droplets began hitting her windshield from
the thick fog. She could see the fog droplets were rotating
in a light blue glow as they generated in mid-air just in front
of her car. The droplets were spiral spreading outward and
became smaller.
Anna realized her simple drive south had become a
white knuckle ride to stay on the highway, in almost stop
driving conditions.
Slow driving through the strange thick fog for over an hour,
brought her out into a thin mist that sparkled with gold sun
streaks. Anna felt a sweep of relief; finally she had navigated
out of the strange fog.
Somehow the air had changed from moist and cold to heat
with no transition. She turned her heater off while the outside
air heat increased reminding her of a desert in summer.
Ahead above the highway the sky looked anything but
normal. Earths blue sky had a green sparkle that swept over
and showered down through it.
Anna decided earth must have taken a near direct hit from a
gigantic solar flare. Even her cars radio had news stations that
were talking about the sun’s increased solar activity.
She hoped the high temperatures would return to normal
soon. The crescent shape flare rapidly swept in a point toward
the west, its heat effect and sparkling green had disappeared.
Anna didn’t expect the drive from Coos Bay, Oregon to
Crescent City, California to be unpleasant. She hadn’t realized
the weather would transform her trip into a terrifying series
of events.
Driving time passed quietly with nothing more out of the
ordinary. She was almost alone on the highway; she noticed
that few cars had driven past her. She turned the heater on
again; the open ocean air once again was still cool in the
late spring.

My Thriller book:  Secret Terror In Wavelengths, has a Techno element.  If interested it can be found on   http://www.amazon.com/Janett-Lee-Wawrzyniak/e/B005K55SMK  and purchased or ordered from over 25,000 booksellers worldwide.

Sunday, June 29, 2014

Stories Goal With insight



Insight adds into the speaker’s personal issues, the nature of his or her relationship to another character, and also can illustrate an aspect of the story’s thematic message.  New experiences reveal surprises as new interpretations and understandings are exposed through the journey. The following excerpt from my latest Thriller book.

As their space craft cleared the mountains,
Lieutenant Ilyon clicked on the computer imaging map of targeted
Earth areas.
“Lieutenant Ilyon, direct our craft to my chosen cargo
release point,” ordered Captain Nar. Project ships wavelengths
to burn a clear path on Earth's surface for 90 earth miles now.”
“We are now underway as you ordered,” confirmed Ilyon.
“All wavelengths are set Captain Nar. Green vegetation will
shrivel and crumble to dust as we pass over it.”
Battle Craft in Nar's fleet were all the same. A disc craft
with a semi-flattened dome was above the war rooms. One
third of the inner lower dome displayed targeted earth areas,
inter-dimensional travel paths and systems within the universes.
The center of the dome could be cleared for viewing any
area of interest.
Outer skin of the craft played an important part in projection
of opposing particles. Those particles changed as all space
is not the same, resulting in propulsion of the craft.
Sensors constantly monitored outer changing particles to
interact with the projection system. The result was direction and speed.
A separate projection system was used
to direct circular hollow fiery rings or emanate overall wavelengths,
for destruction of their intended targets.
Inside the craft was grey in color. The crew’s quarters took
up a portion of the outside ring for a number of over two
thousand crew members. One smaller section of the lower
inner level opened outward for craft access. The center outside
diameter had porthole viewing windows from an outer white
color craft.
“Contact the fleet Lieutenant Ilyon. Increase the suns
wavelengths and earths volcanic seismic wavelength activity.
Both wavelengths will penetrate through all of Earths slower
moving particles.”
His light brown eyes oddly sparkled in the light, Nar continued,
“Increase with the sun until people lose consciousness.
They will wake up with some memory loss. The volcanic irradiation
wavelengths will heat through people, until their skin
is red.”
Ilyon threw a contemptuous look at the viewing screens, the
lids of his light brown eyes narrowed. “Captain Nar, you need
my assistance. With selected map areas of coverage; earth’s
population will not suspect, there are intelligent wavelength
controlling sources. Alternate the wavelengths intensity intermittently,
around the planet. Earth will have more frequent
earthquakes and storms, both will intensify.”
“Of course,” Nar agreed reflectively glancing at the screens.
“I can certainly understand that. This will plunge the world
into a time of global crisis. Permission is granted Ilyon your
suggestion is accepted. Monitor the various light frequencies
and reactions of the nearest space objects and the diffuse
plasma clouds, there may be subtle changes. We don’t want to
attract any surprise guests.”
Abruptly Ilyon turned to the bank of controls and contacted
the battle group. He licked his lips as he entered the additional
order to alternate the wavelengths intermittently. He turned
back to Nar, “I have ordered the battle group to complete your
requested task,” Ilyon said calmly.
“They have acknowledged. All Battle Group wavelengths
have been fired simultaneously. Our dimension has increased
interactive wavelength intensity and will maintain the
increase,” Ilyon said.
Low conversation among crew members in the crafts war
room went silent. They knew complete destruction of earth
was coming.
A door slid open and crew members came into the war
room. They gathered and watched the viewing screens. It had
started, the long awaited for time when all of their hard work
would be completed at once.
Crew could now see as they stood under the overhead
dome, a long arching arm of one gigantic sparkling solar flare.
It was rapidly reaching out in a travel path through black space
toward earth.
The flare one of many to come would add electromagnetism
to earths causing more earthquake swarms with increased
quake magnitudes.
Earths only relief would be in its rotation. Flares would
unbalance earth’s electric charges; sweeping more away in daylight
than night hours could accumulate.

My Thriller book:  Secret Terror In Wavelengths, has a Techno element.  If interested it can be found on   http://www.amazon.com/Janett-Lee-Wawrzyniak/e/B005K55SMK  and purchased or ordered from over 25,000 booksellers worldwide.