Stories Goal With insight

Insight adds into the speaker’s personal issues, the nature of his or her relationship to another character, and also can illustrate an aspect of the story’s thematic message.  New experiences reveal surprises as new interpretations and understandings are exposed through the journey. The following excerpt from my latest Thriller book.

As their space craft cleared the mountains,

Lieutenant Ilyon clicked on the computer imaging map of targeted

Earth areas.

“Lieutenant Ilyon, direct our craft to my chosen cargo

release point,” ordered Captain Nar. Project ships wavelengths

to burn a clear path on Earth's surface for 90 earth miles now.”

“We are now underway as you ordered,” confirmed Ilyon.

“All wavelengths are set Captain Nar. Green vegetation will

shrivel and crumble to dust as we pass over it.”

Battle Craft in Nar's fleet were all the same. A disc craft

with a semi-flattened dome was above the war rooms. One

third of the inner lower dome displayed targeted earth areas,

inter-dimensional travel paths and systems within the universes.

The center of the dome could be cleared for viewing any

area of interest.

Outer skin of the craft played an important part in projection

of opposing particles. Those particles changed as all space

is not the same, resulting in propulsion of the craft.

Sensors constantly monitored outer changing particles to

interact with the projection system. The result was direction and speed.
A separate projection system was used

to direct circular hollow fiery rings or emanate overall wavelengths,

for destruction of their intended targets.

Inside the craft was grey in color. The crew’s quarters took

up a portion of the outside ring for a number of over two

thousand crew members. One smaller section of the lower

inner level opened outward for craft access. The center outside

diameter had porthole viewing windows from an outer white

color craft.

“Contact the fleet Lieutenant Ilyon. Increase the suns

wavelengths and earths volcanic seismic wavelength activity.

Both wavelengths will penetrate through all of Earths slower

moving particles.”

His light brown eyes oddly sparkled in the light, Nar continued,

“Increase with the sun until people lose consciousness.

They will wake up with some memory loss. The volcanic irradiation

wavelengths will heat through people, until their skin

is red.”

Ilyon threw a contemptuous look at the viewing screens, the

lids of his light brown eyes narrowed. “Captain Nar, you need

my assistance. With selected map areas of coverage; earth’s

population will not suspect, there are intelligent wavelength

controlling sources. Alternate the wavelengths intensity intermittently,

around the planet. Earth will have more frequent

earthquakes and storms, both will intensify.”

“Of course,” Nar agreed reflectively glancing at the screens.

“I can certainly understand that. This will plunge the world

into a time of global crisis. Permission is granted Ilyon your

suggestion is accepted. Monitor the various light frequencies

and reactions of the nearest space objects and the diffuse

plasma clouds, there may be subtle changes. We don’t want to

attract any surprise guests.”

Abruptly Ilyon turned to the bank of controls and contacted

the battle group. He licked his lips as he entered the additional

order to alternate the wavelengths intermittently. He turned

back to Nar, “I have ordered the battle group to complete your

requested task,” Ilyon said calmly.

“They have acknowledged. All Battle Group wavelengths

have been fired simultaneously. Our dimension has increased

interactive wavelength intensity and will maintain the

increase,” Ilyon said.

Low conversation among crew members in the crafts war

room went silent. They knew complete destruction of earth

was coming.

A door slid open and crew members came into the war

room. They gathered and watched the viewing screens. It had

started, the long awaited for time when all of their hard work

would be completed at once.

Crew could now see as they stood under the overhead

dome, a long arching arm of one gigantic sparkling solar flare.

It was rapidly reaching out in a travel path through black space

toward earth.

The flare one of many to come would add electromagnetism

to earths causing more earthquake swarms with increased

quake magnitudes.

Earths only relief would be in its rotation. Flares would

unbalance earth’s electric charges; sweeping more away in daylight

than night hours could accumulate.

My Thriller book:  Secret Terror In Wavelengths, has a Techno element.  If interested it can be found on   http://www.amazon.com/Janett-Lee-Wawrzyniak/e/B005K55SMK  and purchased or ordered from over 25,000 booksellers worldwide.

Psychology Today: Stories Are Psychology

Each characters growth or interaction is an awareness of attraction or danger.  This awareness can arise through experience and at times circumstances driving logic or feeling.  The following excerpt is from my latest Thriller book.

 

Phil felt like a distant observer around Nanci when she had more to say than most people.

Tonight he felt like Nanci and something else was watching him through her.  Had she responded to something she wasn’t telling him about!  Knowing Nanci it wouldn’t take her long to start talking about it if there was something he should know.

She had begun to have a certain tone of interrogation in her speech.  He didn’t really like being questioned in that manner.  Why would she interrupt to try and block progress!

He remembered what Nar did to Nanci and realized she probably did sound more in charge than Nar would want.  He hadn’t ever voiced being in charge like Nanci was driven to.

He suspected Nar might plan to inflict the same injury on him.  Why Nanci would confront him with Nar’s behavior made sense now.  Possible she was trying to drag him into a bad situation.  She would have to be watched even more closely without feeling trapped.  He had no desire to be tortured; all he could do was complete his work as usual, he was the supervisor in charge.

Several network supervisors walked into his office.  “Phil, the devices have been picked up for distribution,” a network member said.  “Some of the members want to know if you have additional information for them before they leave.

Phil hadn’t expected a follow up for instructions he had already given.  That was beginning to fit in with Nanci’s reactions.  There was something else he had noticed barely discernible about some of the members.  They seemed to be getting somewhat distant and a little disjointed when they spoke.  In fact even the air around him seemed to change when they were present.  He knew there was nothing about them that was familiar to him; yet it seemed they had become almost non-human and dangerous with more demands.  He decided he would ignore it unless something really drastic happened, then he would deal with them.

“There is something that has come to my attention,” Phil said.  “We are moving ahead with our mission.  Make sure you tell everyone they are not expendable.  Nothing has changed we are assured of success; we have the upper hand, a technology that can’t be surpassed and the intelligence behind it that will last forever never changing.”

“We’ll get the news out to network personnel,” the member said.  “They need to know what is happening so they can make plans and move forward.”

“Our helicopters on the ships off shore and from other inland areas will be flying through for moral,” Phil said.  “They can land anywhere is the idea.  They are less obvious for us than jets.”

“Nar and his battle group are here to support us and be visible,” a member said.  “We know his battle group will interact in our defense.  We just haven’t seen that happen yet.”

“Nar is waiting for all of the devices to be delivered.  Then we begin our offensive for complete control,” Phil said.  He looked around the room.  “We are more effective with the devices; this is not a tug of war.  Nar is going have a complete overwhelming success and we are destined to rule earth for Nar.”

“Have patience, Nar and his battle group will come in visibly above us surrounding all of us and then defend us,” Phil told them.  “Keep in mind we are the ground forces and they are the air support.”

Phil clicked a switch on a small control panel.  One of his wall screens lit up.  “This is from one of our surveillance cameras covering a valley to the east,” he said.  “Hundreds of Nar’s battle group are gathered for our support.  You can see them hovering in a square formation.  They have gone to great lengths for us to avoid detection.  There are countless valleys like this around the world.  They are well organized and have continually defended us with wavelengths from individual and group craft.”

My Thriller book:  Secret Terror In Wavelengths, has a Techno element.  If interested it can be found on   http://www.amazon.com/Janett-Lee-Wawrzyniak/e/B005K55SMK  and purchased or ordered from over 25,000 booksellers worldwide.