Especially
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put into. Grip your reader and return
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action levels can end with a unity of life going on.
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Jay and
Leo wasted no time in taking charge of the network device. The device was now on a table in one of the
back offices was hooked up to testing equipment. Everything about the device was being input
into their computer system.
A thick
red glow streamed through the huge plate glass windows into the dining
room. It surrounded dinner guests, while
most of them were still seated.
With the
red glow came a cold electric feeling that caused a sense of apprehension that
something sinister had entered. That
feeling was caused by the very real wavelengths surrounding them; that everyone
in Nar’s dimension lived in daily. Just
the nearness of the UFO’s close observation of people caused the unsettling
feeling.
Guests
near the windows stood to watch, and everyone could see the UFO’s outside
hovering. It lasted more than twenty
minutes, and then the bizarre red glow receded back to the UFO.
Guests
and members watched from the windows as the UFO’s headed in a flight to the
south. Everyone’s sensing and thoughts
returned to normal when the UFO’s were a distance away. Their dining room was warm and comfortable
again; many people breathed a sigh of relief when the excruciating ordeal had
ended.
For what
seemed like a small eternity Knoton and Anton looked through the windows.
“We’ll
tell the Commander about this as soon as he comes back from the offices,”
Knoton said quietly. “The UFO’s showing
up outside the windows affecting everyone like that is not what anyone
expected. They seem to have caused a
connection we haven’t been able to confirm ever before.”
Looking
down on the device setting on a work table, the Commander said, “Leo we have to
duplicate the wavelength from this device and Nar’s wavelength so we can block
them.”
“We’re
working on it, and once we have that from the intensities, let’s search out to
locate the wavelength from Stephen’s faster quantum dimension.”
“I’m with
you on that, measure, trace and track to block Nar and the network from
anywhere,” the Commander said.
